I wrote a dirty story

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Post by Iori E » Fri Jan 05, 2007 10:44

O___O

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Post by Gunsmith » Fri Jan 05, 2007 15:25

pubes :3

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IT'S A TRAP!!!!!

Post by Gunsmith » Tue Jan 30, 2007 15:26

latest little story is up!

http://karlsimposter.com/text/

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Post by BP » Wed Jan 31, 2007 12:17


y: I’M NOT A PIECE OF FUCKING MEAT!!!
I see a forum quote reference! (aside from the word "fucking", of course)

In general, much like before, you've managed to convey the essence of dialogue well. As if it's just a regular situation where a father imposes on his daughter to marry someone she does not want. Nice work!

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Post by Gunsmith » Thu Feb 01, 2007 23:09

daughter? :3

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